Need input

[sludgeguy]

Thanks Lynn, you're right I did not express the goal of the scene.
The title/ punch line is "Bad mouse Problem".

I had not thought of the punch out, easily done but it would add a ton to the scene. You are correct I asked and I thank you!

Al, The dead mouse has passed though my mind but that would make it more of a revenge scene than an on going problem.

Thanks again, love the ideas I've been getting,
Doug

[Dan S]

When you get done with these mice think Village People...I mean Village Mice!
How about a samauri or ninja mouse?
Dan